Dear
Sir or Madam, enclosed is a teaser for my newest novel, but first…
My
second novel, available in paperback and Kindle editions on Amazon, is offbeat,
quirky, and elicited some offbeat and quirky comments, as you might expect from
my offbeat and quirky readers.
“Too
much sex and violence for me!” Wait a
sec! You can have too much sex? An old wives tale. Very old wives. Wives with dementia.
“Laugh
out loud funny!” My fervent hope is the
reader laughed at the right places.
“I
don’t buy books.” For your vigorous
resolve, my poverty stricken family applauds you with hunger-weakened hands.
“The
part I liked best was….now I can’t remember.”
What was your name again?
“I
thought things like this could never happen, and then my wife found the
photos.” Delete, delete, delete. Never forget these words.
For
those of you, and by that I mean the billions of you around the world that have
not had the supreme pleasure of reading my latest scabrous tale of the small
town South, I offer this encapsulation:
Jack Hudson is in a
pickle. He’s not a private investigator; he’s a small town, small time writer.
But, when a well-to-do acquaintance and fraternity brother asks him to check on
his wife, Jack is all ears. He has good reasons. The fraternity brother’s wife
and Jack are on better than speaking terms, if you know what I mean, wink,
wink, nudge, nudge. The job sounds simple and there’s money on the table for
just one night of slightly perverse snooping. But, simple things aren’t. Now
the wife is missing, Jack is accused, Jack’s other girlfriend is again tangled
with her ex-husband, the fraternity brother’s first wife may also be missing,
and Jack’s simple life is instantly scrambled and scattered across Cassavora
County, several other counties, New Orleans and Charleston. Oh yeah, Jack’s
brother may be part of a criminal conspiracy, Jack’s mother is on her last
legs…Damn, I know your heart is pounding just thinking about it!
Ready for a sample? Something to whet your curious and slightly
deranged appetite for twisted mayhem?
Keep reading!
Extract
From: Lowdown. Dirty. Shame.
A white and tan Ford, a row of flashing blue
lights on top, tires crunching the gravel, stops behind my dented, aging, but
still dependable Honda. A couple of officers step out, adjusting their gun
belts and heading for my front door. I hide in the semidarkness of my bedroom
and edge the curtain back another inch. Momentary comfort, before somebody
pounds my door with a sledgehammer fist.
An edgy feeling, like a kid playing hide-and-seek when the footsteps get
closer.
Normally I’m up and sparking at seven thirty,
but the night before had stretched out like a lazy cat. Make that a semi-guilty, lazy cat.
The knock is not the gentle knock of a
frolicsome cutie, followed by an invitation to come in, take off her clothes,
and straddle my quivering flesh.
This knock carries visions of chokeholds and
handcuffs.
“Sheriff’s
Department. We need to ask you a few
questions.” A deputy bangs a couple of
more times.
“Just a
second.” I grab a robe. Judy, a sixth grade teacher, offered me a
pair of pajamas a few years back, but the two of us never used them. The PJ habit didn’t take.
“Sir, we’re asking
you to open the door!” The sharply
pitched voice wears a cloak of authority and likes the fit.
“Hang on!” This time
I yell a little louder. Loud, not
threatening. Only a masochist, or
someone suicidal threatens cops. I’m
just a mild mannered writer who yearns for finer things than he can
afford. Younger cars. Faster women.
Sunlight cuts my
eyes and sprays across two officers in Cassavora County brown and tan uniforms.
They stand there hatless, with hard eyes, like they’ve just spotted Son of
Sam. The guy in front is shorter and
thinner. Behind him, the other deputy makes up the difference, with beef to
spare. The big guy gives me a bully’s
thick-lidded stare, and adjusts his uniform shirt, the way fat guys do when
they’re trying to keep their pants pulled up over their paunch.
I hold up a hand for
shade.
“Sir, we need to ask you a few questions.”
“Yeah, you said that.”
The guy in front, the skinny one, rocks back on
his heels, his thumbs hooked inside his tooled leather pistol belt with the
fingers of his right hand lightly brushing the handle. The big guy doesn’t say
anything, just keeps glaring at me like a linebacker determined to spear the
passer.
“What questions?”
“When did you come
in last night, sir?” Don’t you just love
the needless signs of respect that mean they can kick your ass with impunity?
“What makes you
think I went out?” Aside from some
innocent snooping, unarmed and without malice, I hadn’t done anything
noteworthy. I never do much noteworthy,
although that seems to be changing by the minute.
“Sir,” the voice
tightens up, “Are you going to answer our questions, or do we need to take you
back to the Sheriff’s Office and question you there?”
“You know, I might
be a little bit more forthcoming if you told me what this was about.” A citizen’s rights are only a thin veneer
when armed officers of the law stand on your porch.
“Forthcoming,” the
big guy mutters, twisting his lips like he’s just spit out a fly.
“We’re conducting a
police investigation and we’d like your cooperation,” the thin one
continues. There is no mistaking the
tone. Bad cop and worse cop.
I step out onto the porch. The big guy grabs my
shoulder, snaps me around and cuffs me.
“My advice is not to try to resist, motherfucker, although that might be
a lot of fun for us.”
“Sorry, didn’t know it was your mother.”
“Don’t,” I hear the thin guy whisper. The big guy tightens his grip anyway.
Resist?
That’s a laugh. “Resist? I haven’t done anything.” That point floats cloud-like past the
guardians of the law. Your newspaper
spouts off about criminals having too many rights, then you’re cuffed and
suddenly everything changes. You’d like
all those rights you read about, a few extras, and a hotshot attorney’s number
on your speed dial. This has to be a
gigantic mistake.
“Can I get some
clothes?”
The thin deputy leads me back to my
bedroom. He doesn’t take off the cuffs,
but grabs a few things as I nod. He
tells me I can change at the jail. The
big guy stays outside, while skinny hustles me through the front door.
Several trailer-court residents have gathered
along my driveway, a few hundred yards from their tin abodes. Must have been
the flashing lights. Moths to the flame.
Between them they probably own a baker’s dozen unpaid traffic fines, not to
mention a file cabinet full of arrest records. Cans of kerosene, waiting for
any flicker of judicial flame. The
deputies barely notice.
“Hey, Dally!” Moon yelled at me. Moon is a well-muscled, white tee shirt,
baseball cap wearing, never been close to a razor in a week, mountain man. My pal.
And just because he writes only as well as a large canine, doesn't mean he's stupid. His river of expertise just doesn't follow the usual gullies to the sea. Need a door re-squared? A lock installed? Not getting a pure sound out of your speakers? Moon reads the intricacies of mechanical problems like another man reads a newspaper. If anyone still reads newspapers.
I should mention my house, a mansion in comparison to my trailer park pals. Nice little bungalow with a porch. Thanks to Moon, I've got speakers in every room and the sound is perfection. Didn't have to buy a new stove when a heating element went out.
Trailer park residents walk under modified streetlights, pulling current the electric co-op hasn't missed. Moon also walks dogs and fixes cars.
Ever ask to see your mechanic's high school transcript? We pick people for their strengths.
My name is Jack, John D. Hudson, or for most
just Hudson. The D is for Dallas. I hate my middle name as much as I hate a
hair in my gravy. Moon gets to call me
anything he wants. First of all, he’s
big enough and mean enough to pound the crap out of Hulk Hogan’s momma, not
necessarily in a fair fight. Secondly,
Moon encourages my passion for fresh herbs, and brings me potted versions from
time to time. Sometimes the little green
plastic cups say Wal-Mart on one side and K-Mart on the other, so god only
knows.
I’ve done a few
things for Moon and his trailer park brethren. Wrote a letter to the County
Commissioners that got the trailer park’s road paved. Also, regular county garbage pickup.
Months ago, Moon was court-ordered to write a
letter of apology to the owner of a local restaurant, after his persistent and
loud belches cleared three tables. Moon
explained he’d been waiting a long time for a table and some of the customers
had finished, but weren’t moving. Right
and wrong are vague concepts for Moon, carelessly applied.
My letter allowed Moon to bypass the Creating a
Public Nuisance charge and climb the social ladder to the infinitely more
respectable, “if you see his car at a restaurant, don’t go near the
place.” He got light community service,
serving lunch an hour a day at the jail. He’d been bringing me herbs ever
since.
I have a couple of
large, rambunctious rosemary bushes in terra cotta pots outside my door. As I’m shoved into the cruiser, the big
deputy walks over, pulls at the leaves and sniffs his fingers. “This stuff legal?” he asks no one in particular.
Moon balls his fists
and starts toward him. “It’s ok,” I
yell, “He’s just never seen a plant before.”
Moon stops.
The thin deputy tells me, “Shut up and watch
your head,” and pushes me the rest of the way in, scattering my bundle of
clothes over the back seat. Both
deputies climb in the front. Doors slam.
“These restraints
are too tight,” I say. The thin plastic
started to numb my fingers.
“Shut up,” the big
deputy says.
I cough, harder than
I need to, spraying the back of his neck.
He turns around, his
eyes on fire, and uses his stick to rap hard against the steel mesh separating
the front seat from the back. In this
case, the mesh is for my protection. “Don’t
do that again,” he says, with venom to spare.
“Hey, my arms are
behind my back. I can’t help it.” I cough again. This time the spray hits both
deputies.
The little guy slams
on the brakes. My face slams into the
mesh, the same time as the big guy swings his stick. My face feels the sting of
a thousand bees. The little guy tells me
if I try that again…the rest of the threat drifts.
A few miles later, we pull in front of the
station. The big guy jerks me out of the backseat more roughly than he needs
to. An uncomfortable feeling snakes down
my spine. This has to be about last
night.
Final words to faithful readers: William Stroud, Amazon, Lowdown. Dirty. Shame. Paperback and Kindle. Be sure to write a brief review on Amazon!
