Saturday, August 14, 2021

His New Novel

 


His New Novel

 

Even from a distance, as soon as she walked through the wrought iron, waist high gate and sauntered across the restaurant's crowded patio, he knew she was beautiful, although others might differ, especially those who embraced the petulant faced, waiver thin, cookie cutter blond versions of womanhood.  The male models are not any better.  Thin as washboards, with every look equally dipped in the bucket of petulance.

 

Why do fashion magazines pick skeletal men and women, with dead eyes and lips so puffy they need to be muzzled?

 

This woman’s smile of pearly teeth would light up a room, or a patio for that matter, and her Marilyn Monroe curves, which today’s Hollywood would describe as fat, would capture every male eye.  Oh, the gently swaying hips under a peach and white springtime skirt, the billowing white, sleeveless blouse, the sparkling blue eyes, the careless way she sat, and how she lightly crossed her legs and tossed her hair before sipping her flute of champagne.  Come to think of it, he couldn’t see her eyes from where he sat, or the pearly teeth, but it didn’t really matter. Ah, the long, careful fingers that held the stem. Tastefully, elegant red fingernails and toenails on beautifully formed, sandaled feet. He could barely see the sandals or the feet, but his mind swam in a cloudy dream.

 

No matter her real name, to him she would be Juliane, the star of his budding novel.  Thoughts swirled with the places he’d take her. To the broad streets of Paris, of course, but also London and Brussels and the sun blessed Italian Riviera, with it’s outdoor cafes and white cloth covered tables, delicately chilled white wines that forever live in memory, and bowls of the freshest harvest from the sea, served in large, colorful bowls by white shirted waiters.  And the bread!  On my wonder, the bread, a perfectly, crusty match for butter and wine sauced black mussels.





She would speak English and Italian and French, naturally.  Who could win the favors of such a woman?  Only a spy.  No, not an ordinary spy, but a young, cultured man of wealth who’d been trapped into spying. Yes, that kind of spy.  Hummmm…a man of noble blood and exquisite taste, whose family is torn between cooperation with those they detest and preservation of house and home.

 

When?  What year?  The war years are most interesting, or the buildup leading to the war years, when the destiny of all of Europe was a guessing game, fueled by whispered conversations in taverns and coffee shops, laced with intrigue that bonds new friends and sly enemies in a chess match of mistrust and survival.

 

1937.  Perfect.  Franco has set the destiny of Spain in a bloody, terrible conflict that won’t end for another two years.  Only the besieged and starving cities of Madrid and Barcelona are still held by the Republicans.  And, now that Germany and Italy had seen how it’s done, they will probably wade into the depths.  Or will they? Ah, the glory of the indefinite scribe.

 

His pen inked a page in his black Moleskin notebook, the skeleton of the plot assembled in black ink on the white pages, with pauses to allow his scribbling to catch up with his scurrying thoughts. Then another page and yet another.

 

Perhaps his novel should be set in the darkness of prewar Paris with optimism fading to despair, amid dangerous thoughts that the huge French army might not prevail, and flanked by France’s desperate hope that the Maginot Line could withstand the onslaught of Germany’s iron fist.

 

He glanced again at the woman. Was she talking to her companion, an older woman?  No, she was listening. Then why were her lips….oh my god, she’s chewing gum, her jaw so slack, he could almost hear the smacking of her lips. That would not do.  But, he could write that out.  No matter. Still, it disturbed him, causing fissures in his sense of perfection.  The fissures slowly became open cracks. It was as if the Mona Lisa, which the French call la Joconde (the happy one), had been splattered with brown globs of freshly spit chewing tobacco.

 

No matter.  He’d deal with that later. He continued to write.  The white paper turned a light gray as a cloud passed.  He stole another glance.  She was smoking a cigarette while chewing gum and he saw her in profile. Deep wrinkles that a crow would be proud of on the corner of her eye.  Made him wish he’d ignored her and left well enough alone.  

 

But, he pressed on, his curiosity a wildcat clawing and hissing.  She had a tattoo on her wrist.  He could just barely make out some guy’s name and something like a protestation of eternal love.  Eternally ugly was more like it.  The tattooist must have been a nervous, one-eyed drunk. Green and red and black ink?  Gauche.  

 

She was older than he’d imagined.  The cloud drifted and the sun came back to reveal dark roots when she tossed her hair. She shouldn’t toss it.  She should have a little pride and wear a close fitting cap or beret.  Hopefully not a ball cap.

 

She looked his way as she reached back and scratched well below her hip.  No doubt she would say something vulgar, then belch.

 

Well, he thought, he could still use her in the novel.  Maybe she could service drunken sailors on the docks at Le Havre.  Maybe she already had. But, she didn’t look French, or well traveled. More likely she’d been fired from a run down coffee shop for being late to work and having dirt under her fingernails. If he used her, it had to be in a minor role to add some color. He’d just have to kill her off in chapter two.

 

He knew he was being shallow.  She would fit well as Faganella in a new version of Oliver Twisted.

 

Nope, he wasn’t going to change horses, not after already having scribed fourteen pages in his notebook. He’d stick with Paris, 1937 and make her a Nazi spy.  Vicious.  Uncaring.  Pulling the wings off of flies. He’d change her name to Helga, code name Tart. But, he’d still kill her off.  The mere thought settled him.

 

He looked around, searching the crowd. Got to be a heroine here.




 

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